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A&E

Clothes placed on

A plastic chair

One shoe on top

The other isn’t there

 

Bones creak

And lungs groan

Skin blushes blue 

As the old queen

Struggles to sit

On her throne

 

‘Where is my book,

hand bag and purse?

Is it dark outside?

How does it all work?’

 

‘It’s dark?

Curtains are open

Without a light

They’ll know, you know

Please draw them

On your way home

And put on a light’

 

‘When am I coming home’, she sighs,

Have they said?’

‘Soon, I say’, ‘soon’

As I stroke her head

 

With no hands there

To soothe or calm

Another hand

Stroked her head 

Out of hours,

In the dark

 

Clothes placed on

A plastic chair

She doesn’t need them now

She isn’t there.

 

Lynn Hamilton - 29th July 2013

 

◄ My God

Concrete Eyes ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 18th Apr 2015 12:23

Intimacy of the mundane is great poetic material. You capture it well. Also the rippling effect of a single potent image.

Preeti Sinha

Wed 15th Apr 2015 10:31

Loss is an absence hard to fill.

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Tommy Carroll

Tue 14th Apr 2015 12:45

Lynn, hi. After several readings a sadness transpired. How easy it is to be 'not there'. Am I reading this work correctly? Restrained loss well penned. Tommy

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Martin Elder

Mon 13th Apr 2015 22:00

This is a great poem Lyn. I can just picture the scene in A and E

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