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Shit brained angel

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Ploughing oily fingers

through unkempt hair.

Two fingering a quiff

down to eye level.

 

the mirror tells me

how cool I look,

and that is all American.

Leather and sneering lipped

 

thats me,bike boy

delivering thunder

into one horse towns

Harley style.

 

A dick loving chick

eyes me up outside the diner.

Takes quite a while

before I make her sorry she did

before she's forgotten

in clouds of blue smoke and wheel spun dirt.

 

Old faces gawk-

with fear!

To them we might as well

be aliens-only meaner!

A few gang banging

fight picking hours later

we ride

 

desperado's

reckless disciples

spreading the good word-

Brando is God!

 

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© Stef Wilde 2015

 

◄ 2.5 minute lasting&93 million miles away smile

The way to learn fuckall ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (6895)

Mon 6th Apr 2015 13:22

such a cool actor eh Preeti.Thank you.xx

Preeti Sinha

Wed 1st Apr 2015 09:36

Brando is God ! Love that !

<Deleted User> (6895)

Mon 30th Mar 2015 20:27

Cheers Natalie.xx

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 29th Mar 2015 20:16

Thanks Rose and Michael.I get your point (no pun intended)Rose,but 'dick' is likely to have been used more in that era I think if you get my meaning.I know a lot of modern day Americans also use the word 'pecker'-that definitely wouldn't have suited.

Cheers both-Stef.xx

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 28th Mar 2015 23:43

unless-prick or cock? x

Michael Napoli

Sat 28th Mar 2015 22:52

I actually like the use of the word "dick" in this context. I feel it provides the proper imagery Stef intended for the woman at the diner in a modern day time. Perhaps the woman is classless which would make sense if she's forgotten in a cloud of smoke. I enjoyed this.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 28th Mar 2015 21:05

Stef,you might want to use 'sex' instead of dick.Dick could be misconstrued.As in nobhead/making a dick of oneself.And you wouldn't want that would you? ;o)


enjoyed nevertheless....x

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