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Transference.(The improved version)

If only

I could put

the words

I want to hear

in your mouth

 

what wonderful things

you would say

to me

and how beautifully alive

the dream would be

◄ Inexistance

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<Deleted User> (13516)

Fri 20th Feb 2015 00:53

I'd be pushing the 'Like' button too. Love the title, love the words.

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Martin Elder

Thu 19th Feb 2015 18:04

Wow Rose some much said with so few words and said so beautifully. Really lovely

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 18th Feb 2015 19:05

oh yes!xx

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