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Leveled Up

Leveled Up

Seems like it was just yesterday when you slew the dragon
Or even took command of an elite team and finished the quest
You've gained many experiences in the field of arts and crafts
And continued to improve your skills on the battlefield of life
With each passing moment, you've either gained irreplaceable memories
Or lost against the time of the ages
But even so, every day is a lesson and every lesson is valuable
Take what you've learned, push onward, and never give up.
Therefore, I would like to congratulate you on your year long journey. You've finally leveled up!
[LVL+1]
:D

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Graham Sherwood

Fri 16th Jan 2015 10:20

A difficult prose style Smash but well worded.
Interesting concept of life as the different levels of a game.

Good to see you posting,

Graham

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Jackie Phillips

Fri 16th Jan 2015 10:17

Nice concept. I was unsure where you were leading in the first few lines and whether your poem was just about playing a game but the light in my brain flickered on after that.

I hope that I personally have managed to level-up after 2014 but whether or not I have, I will continue to 'push onward, and never give up.'

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