Within My Rights

As the 8th doctor nodded in response to my assumption, his hollow eyes and rounded shoulders gave me my first experience of being right with no sense of achievement.

humbled and worn ►

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Lint Gannon

Tue 16th Dec 2014 21:12

To Cynthia.

Yes. To give it a "roll on" feel. Rather than a poetic rhythm or dancing with the words.

Just a certain point in a story told bluntly. So the reader can build the foundations of the setting themselves.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 15th Dec 2014 19:31

I admire this very much.Is there a reason that you have not tried to use 'poetic breaks'?

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