-the ramblings of another young girl-

written: 12/03/14

  I want you to feel the way I felt.

 I want you to feel yourself being torn apart

by such simple things as words.

 I want you to feel how hard it is to breathe

with that kind of pain.

 I want you to feel what it's like to cry

and not be able to stop.

 I want you to feel your heart breaking

into tiny little pieces.

 I want you to feel the memories flood your mind

when you're finally able to smile again.

 I want you

to not just read,

but to Feel my poetry.

 Maybe then,

after you Feel,

you'll understand what you did to me..

  and you'll know what heartbreak really is.


◄ The Door

..i have this fear ►


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Sat 13th Dec 2014 19:42

Thank you :)

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Wed 10th Dec 2014 17:46

Absolutely wonderful! I know that feeling way too well. Very good imagery.

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