Feel

-the ramblings of another young girl-

written: 12/03/14

  I want you to feel the way I felt.

 I want you to feel yourself being torn apart

by such simple things as words.

 I want you to feel how hard it is to breathe

with that kind of pain.

 I want you to feel what it's like to cry

and not be able to stop.

 I want you to feel your heart breaking

into tiny little pieces.

 I want you to feel the memories flood your mind

when you're finally able to smile again.

 I want you

to not just read,

but to Feel my poetry.

 Maybe then,

after you Feel,

you'll understand what you did to me..

  and you'll know what heartbreak really is.

        .L.m.P.

◄ The Door

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Comments

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.L.m.P.

Sat 13th Dec 2014 19:42

Thank you :)

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Kassandra

Wed 10th Dec 2014 17:46

Absolutely wonderful! I know that feeling way too well. Very good imagery.

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