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The Touching

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He:  I thought I touched you-

 but softly.

She  ''But I'm as bits falling.''

He:  You've left me counting

the pieces.

She:  ''Then pick me up.''

He:  But what then?

She:  ''Stop counting start mending.''

 

 

 

words and foto T Carroll

◄ Hockey anyone?

She watched him waiting ►

Comments

Preeti Sinha

Fri 15th Aug 2014 14:41

"Stop counting and start mending"
If only people would apply that in life!
Such economical writing and delivers such a punch.

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