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Cascade

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Ferris ocularity,

observing holy motion,

facilitates the weaving

of an elemental web.

 

Cirrus drips precipitate

a waving,

all devoted to rotation,

sewing oceanic lace

and braiding rain

to brine the breeze.

 

Pleasure seeks a penny slot

as bed and breakfast tongues

lick the candy cane locale.                                                                  

Sunday shoes clatter on a jetty,

all skeletal,

pirouetting as they

echo

           echo

echo

           oscillation.

 

 

 

 

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Laura Taylor

Tue 10th Jun 2014 13:27

Hey Cynth - why thank you. Mmmm dynamic is what I was going for, with interconnectedness. I've realised this is a major theme in a lot of my writing - how everything ties in. And I don't seem to be able to rein in assonance or alliteration at ALL, so I'll just give them free rein. I'm sure at one point they'll get fed up themselves ;)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 9th Jun 2014 12:15

Well - a masterpiece of original thought, dynamic imagery and the flying words to give them life in an Orgy of Musicality as you stream all the skills of word sounds throughout, in one continuous dance.

Nuff said. You'll think I'm barmy.

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Laura Taylor

Mon 9th Jun 2014 10:09

Eh up - thank you very much Steve :)

Tis a shame the photo only came out small - but I've put a link on to show it bigger anyway.

steve mellor

Sun 8th Jun 2014 17:05

Really, really liked the piece. Nothing else needs saying (from me anyway)

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