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The threshold folk

When you stand at the sand at the end of the land
before you tread the brine
where the driftwood spells with the seaweed's shells,
your barefoot prayers at the shrine
of the unseen queen of the space between
as you pass from old to new
call the gods whose friends are the odds and ends
of the threshold folk like you.

◄ Gentle Readers

Belloc rewrites Sredni Vashtar ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 12th Jun 2014 22:16

Charming metaphor, like an incantation, that could be for any 'threshold' situation, real or imagined. Skilful diction and sustained metre/rhyme control.

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