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Some people have it, some don't

Wisdom is ageless

Some people have it

Some don't

Learn to listen 

capturing the wisdom around you

Learn to respect

those that have it

Some don't get it

Others do

Some live their whole lives

in their own stew

without a clue

WHICH ONE ARE YOU????

 

Just because you are

old and grumpy

doesn't mean you

don't have it

whatever IT means

Just because you are

young and cry

doesn't mean you 

don't have it

whatever IT means

'Wisdom'

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joe kozarzewski

Fri 6th Jun 2014 12:15

Strange as it may seem, it was a woman I was arguing with, and she could definitely hear me, apart from an empathetic level, as I was shouting at the end. Moving forward now she has laid a guilt trip on me, and sometimes appears in a wheelchair, so I'm given to understand or hinted at, that it is my fault that her life is shit. The strange thing about it is, I remember getting wound up and little about the detail.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 1st May 2014 11:10

Pub arguments - the source of nations! Maybe he couldn't hear you.

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joe kozarzewski

Wed 30th Apr 2014 13:43

Thank you for commenting. I am an instinctive writer, having been to three universities, I don't like the effete, deconstucted style they promote, emotionless and precious. This particular poem was inspired by a pub argument where I argued that texting all the time with plugs in your ears is a sign of being antisocial and alienated from the natural world. The person I was arguing with wouldn't have any of it, didn't concede even an inch, thus my wisdom theme.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 28th Apr 2014 13:01

It's short but it's strong, slamming home a vital truism that needs a clear voice.

The 'half' sentence is interesting - capitals but no punctuation.

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