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CAR WASH

In a stiff wind the petrol station
forecourt sign is confirmation
of a necessary lie that
most ignore and some decry; as
one short word on each curved side
is seen to spin, and so elide,
the eye perceives the sign is for
not cleaner cars, but cash and war.

◄ IN PASSING.

WIDE ASLEEP. ►

Comments

Travis Brow

Tue 8th Apr 2014 13:25

Thanks Simon, it took me a while to get it right, and there's every chance it'll change. I can't help editing and re-editing.

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Simon Marks

Mon 7th Apr 2014 22:56

My kinda poem - short, but makes you think.

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