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On The Bridge

(There seems to be an increasing amount of people taking, or attempting to take their own lives by jumping off motorway bridges. Of course it's a cry for help but sometimes it all goes wrong and ends tragically.)

 

It was me that found you on that lonely road that night

I spied you on the cameras around midnight

You looked cold on top of that bridge,

I suppose you thought you’d see things in a different kind of light,

Way up on the bridge

In the middle of the night.

The ambulance was on stand by anyway

And I know you had your problems

If only you could have let on, hinted to someone

Maybe you wouldn’t have given us such a fright

But I prefer to believe you were coming down

And that you tripped or were nudged by the wind

It’s a sad place to die in the middle of a road

No one heard you call or shout

And darkness came when the lights went out.

suicide

◄ The coldest Morning

I Am That Seed ►

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Steve Higgins

Thu 20th Feb 2014 11:39

I help deal with incidents like this almost every week. Some are sorted quickly, others not. All are shocking to greater and lesser extents. Some involve death, others involve negotiators talking to the would be suicide person for what seems like ages. All are upsetting, especially when you stop for a few moments and jot down a few lines.
Thanks for reading and commenting Mike and Solar

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Mon 17th Feb 2014 20:25

suicide is NOT a cowards way out.Mike is spot on in saying it takes all ones strength to summon the courage to commit such a desperate act.

Best regards Steve.x

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Noetic-fret!

Mon 17th Feb 2014 19:23

Hi Steve, a great poem. I have been on that bridge once or twice in my life. I suffer from PTSD among other things. Sometimes, it is a cry for help. Sometimes, the sorrow becomes you and you don't care to be brought down from such heights except by the mercy of gravity to end your life.

I have stood on that bridge, at times it has been a place to solve all issues. Other times just a place of deep contemplation.

It take all your strength to summon the courage to jump. It takes every ounce of bravery you can muster. Because at the end of the day, it is often a leap of faith not only to end a life, but also a discreet hope that there be more 'in' life than the struggle we have here.

My heart goes out to those that have felt the need to think of suicide. Alas, there is nothing more we could possibly do, except look for the warning signs from other's who struggle.

There is more i could say about this part of our living, but I know you already know.

Best wishes,

Mike

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