Patterns
Chasing patterns around the ceiling
candle flickering
in the half-light
Chasing patterns around the mind
with myself dickering
hunting for the right
Chasing patterns around you
so little bickering
you’re a delight
Comments
like the use of chasing patterns at the beginning of each stanza here, dave. it works really well. excellent stuff
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<Deleted User> (11750)
Mon 30th Dec 2013 18:42
I really like this, although I'm not so keen on the title. Do you have your own blog? I have just created one. Maybe you'd like to have a look?
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