Chasing patterns around the ceiling

candle flickering

in the half-light


Chasing patterns around the mind

with myself dickering

hunting for the right


Chasing patterns around you

so little bickering

you’re a delight

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<Deleted User> (11750)

Mon 30th Dec 2013 18:42

I really like this, although I'm not so keen on the title. Do you have your own blog? I have just created one. Maybe you'd like to have a look?

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Gray Nicholls

Fri 27th Dec 2013 11:31

like the use of chasing patterns at the beginning of each stanza here, dave. it works really well. excellent stuff

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