Curiosity killed no cat
Of late
I've stared past
fork-strewn dinner plates;
tines pinging like tuning forks,
precise and crystalline:
from scratches on ruled pads,
to clacking on fading keyboard tiles,
to taps on smudged touch screens --
thoughts and feelings exiled, martyred
for existence beyond skull and ribs.
Of late
my chin bobs
to strains of melodies;
countering the blare of the radio beats.
No one sees this march to my own drums.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Wed 18th Dec 2013 14:08
Nicely put, Frederick. Perhaps you might keep the 'fork' idea together in one stanza and adjust your overall structure plan - three 5-liners would work equally well for your ideas and not seem 'contrived'.