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Curiosity killed no cat

Of late

I've stared past

fork-strewn dinner plates;

 

tines pinging like tuning forks,

precise and crystalline:

 

from scratches on ruled pads,

to clacking on fading keyboard tiles, 

to taps on smudged touch screens --

 

thoughts and feelings exiled, martyred

for existence beyond skull and ribs.

 

Of late  

my chin bobs

to strains of melodies;

 

countering the blare of the radio beats.

No one sees this march to my own drums.

 

 

 

◄ Moving On

The possible dream ►

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 18th Dec 2013 14:08

Nicely put, Frederick. Perhaps you might keep the 'fork' idea together in one stanza and adjust your overall structure plan - three 5-liners would work equally well for your ideas and not seem 'contrived'.

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