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Lilac

 
 
Your weight
is like balancing  small stones
or a column of water on my chest;
 
trickles of  frequency;
humble –
not wishing to offend.
 
Compared with darker hues -
you clean me of defence;
lie me out thin;
 
a sleep growing old
by breathing small
through light narcotics.
 
 
Sometimes
clasps of evergreen
are at the shoulder
 
deciding you a supplement
of health;
docile flower heads
 
who suffocate love
where too patient
fingers tremble.
 
These charms are polite,
considerate of others  
(how brightly you disappear in a blue room)
 
but it is the sound of you, I cannot forgive;
the lock of saying your name
velvet-thick;
 
it folds me in,
fills my lungs with acrylic,
bringing your impossibilities to the fore.
 
 
 
 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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David Blake

Tue 14th Jan 2014 22:58

This is really great Marianne. Brilliant imagery-evoking piece, as always :) x

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garside

Fri 20th Dec 2013 21:33

balancing small stones or a column of water on my chest

x

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 17th Dec 2013 22:46

Super work Marianne. If words could smell, these would. Well done as usual!

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 13th Dec 2013 12:35

I love lilacs too. I have filled my home with them, the scent so thick you could hardly breathe.

Great poem. I wish I could be 'romantic' and 'interesting'.

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