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Coronation Party, Amy’s Terrace, 1953

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Staring out at me over a gulf of sixty years,

Your glassy-eyed optimism, born of NHS specs

Your staid gaiety in checked dresses

Bunting fashioned from austerity

Displayed in glorious mono, black and white

Jostling just to have self-created fun

And celebrate a distant Queen you’ll never see.

 

How perfectly the instant caught you

Spots on the negative though

“Mam! There’s a man wi’ a camera!”

One-sixtieth of a second, frozen

Forever, in a rare tableau of enjoyment.

 

What happened to you all? I wonder, I

Know what happened to your houses, flattened, every one;

But what became of you? Some died, some married,

Some with us still. I hope it all worked out

The way you always wanted, whatever.

Though, sadly, I suspect that it did not.

 

Cakes and lemonade on trestle tables,

Union Jacks , ham sandwiches

And maybe cakes from Skelton’s.

Simple days, when we all knew our place,

Knew who the bad guys were, and

The Lone Ranger always wore a white hat;

Amusing yourselves with home-baked treats

And waving flags, to show you trust the future.

 

Once my neighbours, now my strangers,

Your dreams, as yet, are un-Gagarined by Sputniks

I only recognise you generically;

I have no idea what your names are,

What your lovers called you,

What your gravestone says…but

 

I wish your spirit still haunted the streets

Reliving your cheery communal joy

In this enigmatic image.

 

A day off school! You shout hooray!

Although you look so happy in the close,

Why do I feel so sad for you, today?

◄ Oppy Wood, May 1917

To An Old Ex On Her Birthday ►

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Dave Bradley

Wed 20th Nov 2013 22:05

Loved it! Well-paced to bring on a bout of nostalgia. My first street party was for the Queen's 25th, but there's a baby in the photo - I was already a father. Oh dear - time!

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Isobel

Wed 20th Nov 2013 19:55

Lovely piece steve. There are so many layers to it. Sorrow for them because the future doesnt necessarily get better, sorrow for their future loss and our own losses. Community spirit and identity IS breaking down and it IS something to mourn.

The coronation day was before my time but I do remember May day and church walking days where all the roads were closed, occasions where communities naturally came together.

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Margaret Holbrook

Wed 20th Nov 2013 17:08

Evocative and delicious as a street party. Loved it.

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Greg Freeman

Wed 20th Nov 2013 16:28

I have a picture of myself at a Coronation party aged nine months, tucking into blancmange or whatever. And my street got flattened, too. Conjures up a lot for me, Steve, including the Lone Ranger. "Your staid gaiety in checked dresses / Bunting fashioned from austerity" are a lovely, very affectionate couple of lines.

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