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It is the Thunderbolt that steers the universe. (Heraclitus)

 

Feeble force of Gravity

Ill founded-university.

NB! Electricity

Overriding energy.

 

Universal current flow

Filaments may faintly glow.

Shorting yields an arc-light show

In short: all stars are “touch and go!”

 

Touch and Go Comp

◄ WASH DAY STRAGGLER (Betjeman mode)

MMMM (For all you shortlinists) ►

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barrie singleton

Thu 14th Nov 2013 00:12

Great pun Cate! If you want to be cosmically blown away, search 'Electric Universe'. Visual stuff will have you writing poems till you drop.
"It is the Thunderbolt that guides the Universe." Heraclitus

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Cate Greenlees

Wed 13th Nov 2013 21:35

Short and enlightening.... I like it!
Cate xx

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barrie singleton

Sat 26th Oct 2013 12:30

For me, Tommy, ze var iss ofer. Thanks for enlightenment re Traven - I can either do Mastermind and get that one right, or just die with more info!

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Tommy Carroll

Sat 26th Oct 2013 12:19

"Light-bulb? We ain't got no light-bulb. We don't need no light-bulb! I don't have to show you any stinkin' light-bulbs!"

Apologies to B Traven

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barrie singleton

Fri 25th Oct 2013 17:26

A touch of the Marty McFly's! Cheers Simon.
The ebullient Isobel CHALLENGED me! And 'Switched On' was the result. Had she called me a coward, I would have simply admitted it.

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Simon Marks

Fri 25th Oct 2013 17:13

Less is more! Sparking stuff.

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barrie singleton

Fri 25th Oct 2013 16:04

A point well made Tommy. Well made indeed!
I see you haven't fixed that lightbulb yet.

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 25th Oct 2013 15:42

Hi Barrie-it's taken 4,500,000,000 years for modern humans to evolve from a molten earth; 5/6,000 years ago for the development of recorded science; the first accounts of recorded astronomy 3,500 years ago; 400 years ago for the development of the telescope; the first confirmed detection outside our solar system of a planet occurred 11 years ago, it's taken 11 years to confirm detection of over 1000 more. Last month (September 2013)cloudy with sunny spells was forecast on Kepler-7b over 1000 LIGHT years away or 5,878,499,817,000 miles from Michael Fish :) Tommy ps-all timings and distances are an approximation.

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barrie singleton

Fri 25th Oct 2013 13:57

Oh gawrsh! (:o)

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Isobel

Fri 25th Oct 2013 13:45

Good on ya Barrie!

I'm also impressed that anyone can write a scientific poem without a soulful artistic response to it all :)

Thanks for posting. x

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