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Forever now and all I might have
been. I have never loved like
this. Never everything. Never from
town to town, or where I lay asleep,
Or my hand straight and deer watching
as they take, hollowed before dark
and venturing to where day breaks.
<Deleted User> (11521)
Tue 8th Oct 2013 22:09
This is dazzlingly powerful. A dreamscape. I am there, amidst the deer and trees and mist.
<Deleted User> (11485)
Sat 28th Sep 2013 18:52
Thank you, Ankita.
<Deleted User> (11197)
Sat 28th Sep 2013 18:51
Beautifully written with such a vivid imagery. :)
<Deleted User> (11485)
Sat 28th Sep 2013 15:34
Many thanks, Francine.
The first few lines are powerful. I had to read this several times because it just resonates so beautifully. Thank you for sharing :-)
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<Deleted User> (11485)
Tue 8th Oct 2013 22:16
Thank you again, Cara.