Julia
Those lips
Those lips
That impending kiss
Their certain submission
The undoubted abuse
You want all of this
Then unparalleled experience
I want to make you feel my lips
An indelible memory
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<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 4th Aug 2013 20:20
loved it,but! we would have ended the poem...
'I want-you-to make-the-feel-of-my lips
an indelible memory'
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xx
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Christopher Dawson
Sun 4th Aug 2013 21:37
Thanks guys.
This was extracted from a conversation, the guy was speaking, trying to form his feelings ...and she (in red) was talking softly over him.