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she doesn't want to make love

she wants to fuck

she doesn't need tenderness

she needs to take it rough

she doesn't want to start out slow

just take her now and don't let go

steal her breath, take her pain

make her feel herself again

she wants the passion hard and fast

make it yours then give it back

she wants to feel herself release

and feel that after-fuck relief

when they've calmed and lights are dimmed

she'll hold him close and let him in.

◄ 3.15, Room 7

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<Deleted User> (11485)

Fri 27th Sep 2013 16:32

Very fine, and very honest.

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Tommy Carroll

Fri 2nd Aug 2013 22:26

K- I have been threatened with such- a shouted silent demand- you have conveyed that simply, and, likewise, done it in the quiet... Tommy

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Ann Foxglove

Wed 31st Jul 2013 14:21

A beautiful finish to this poem - well observed! x

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