canal-boat nudge
into hill
not budge
nose
into tall slot
back-gate close
water spill
from top
slot fill
boat
up and up
float
to top
front gate
boat stop
man shout
gate open
boat go out.
miracle?...Yup!
water down
boat up
Good fun and clever. Canals are wonderful.
Love the rhythm of this. Brilliant!
All right!
So this re-titled whittled-down oldie is not an epic!
(But it`s hot and I`ve just woke up)
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barrie singleton
Sun 27th Oct 2013 22:43
Have you done the Caen Flight Harry? Ecstacy!
Not far from me. Smug.