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NAKED

I am naked like a tree stripped in winter time, exposed like uncovered truths, profound as they emerge into the light, i am naked like a newborn, unexpectant to the world that awaits them. No clothes,no skin. Do they see my bleeding heart? I am naked like a soul without a vessel, despratley seeking a shell to retreat in. I am naked,my skin is thick and weathered, sometimes i lie upon a bed of nails, sometimes i drown in feathers. I stay naked, as others drape their bodys in fashion, i am naked,forever naked, so they cannot mistake my passion...

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<Deleted User> (5879)

Sat 21st Feb 2009 11:04

Thanks very much i really appreciate your comment its nice to know that theres some people left that are real....And appreciate realness...Thats put me in a gud mood! Lol thank you!

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Noetic-fret!

Sat 21st Feb 2009 10:32

I can really empathise with this. Some people say too often, "You wear your heart on your sleeve." And I wonder whether this be a taunt for the fact they find it hard to express themselves. It can leave you wide open to ridicule. But this poem, says all about the passion that some people have. And the fact, they're not afraid to ask of it. If more people expressed how they truly feel, perhaps the problems of communication would be overcome. Nice one Yosh.

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