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Girls and bubbles

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Joyous within her bubble
She rises high
On the warmth of his words
In the air of his affection
Floats without direction
A single prick would bring her crashing to earth
But a married one could make a bigger impact.

◄ Vicar of Stiffkey

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<Deleted User> (5812)

Fri 20th Feb 2009 16:39

i was floating along with the romance of that 'til you burst my bubble at the end. i liked that- it's true, too x

<Deleted User> (5646)

Fri 20th Feb 2009 13:03

Yeah, he could probably put her six feet below the surface but it was probably worth it. :-)
I'm happy in my bubble by the way.
Janet.x

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