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A Good Age

 

Birth was unexceptional

although exotic.

Happening as it did

in the Far East.


An exuberant early life

attracted many glances

and some comments.

Stripped off

in a few interesting places.


But then greying,

wrinkled, sagging.

Nothing more these days

than a bit of gardening

and occasional walk

to the shops.


Now though,

blotched and fading,

it is the end.

Twenty one.

Good age for a tee shirt.

◄ Agadir

Ali ►

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Gus Jonsson

Wed 18th Feb 2009 11:25

Got a pair of underpants like that!

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Malpoet

Mon 16th Feb 2009 16:04

Thanks. The irony is that the t-shirt was free in the first place. It was an advertising handout by a pub.

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sian howell

Mon 16th Feb 2009 14:36

very good...I enjoyed hearing your poem read, it adds some depth to an already great piece of writing.
Sian

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Chris Dawson

Mon 16th Feb 2009 14:08

Loved this! I actually have things still in my wardrobe that are older than my children. Sadly - these days, they have to stay in there. :-))
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