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The walk home

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Shuffling along the lane

his plain black jacket, flaps in the wind.

 

skipping in the darkness, wearing her new white dress

she sparkles

 

like a snowflake, her fuzzy outline

becoming, as he wipes his glasses clean.

 

lifting her arms up to the moonlight, pressing her cheek

against his woolly sleeve

 

her youthful freshness, washes over him

exhilarating, like reaching the mountain summit

spring in full bloom.

 

their shadows join - under the beam of the street lamp

guiding them home.

 

By Belinda Johnston

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Belinda Johnston

Mon 16th Feb 2009 00:22

Thank you JT for your comments. I've been working on this poem for a couple of weeks, and I've been swapping and changing words and the order, but glad to hear that the reader was captured by the images and descriptions, many thanks again, Love Belinda

<Deleted User> (5870)

Sun 15th Feb 2009 16:52

You surely brought me into this lovely snapshot, so well described, Belinda. Wonderful descriptive phrasing and flow. Cheers, JT

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