IS THIS POETRY?
When you wear your thin dress
And look at me
Is this poetry
When I touch your arm
Casually
Is this poetry
When your eyes shine
Magnificently
Is this poetry
When we lie together
Silently
And the breeze lifts the curtain
Gently
To reveal the moon shining
Romantically
Please tell me
Honestly
Is
This
Poetry ?
copyright (c) David Subacchi.2012
Nice piece of work -love it,
Steve
Thanks Stella :)
David
<Deleted User> (6315)
Tue 7th May 2013 00:52
aww David...look at you two there!..and yes I think you should keep the this..keeps all that romance in the present doesn't it?.. :)
Well, you did ask: if that is poetry, then so is this.
Yes
Thanks Stuart and will do!
David
<Deleted User> (11056)
Sun 5th May 2013 13:07
Very nice sentiment, check out my Vegas wedding poem. :)
Originally 'Is THAT poetry' ? but have changed to 'THIS'. Happy for any comments on this as I am not 100% on which it should be! :)
David
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David Subacchi
Wed 22nd May 2013 21:54
Thanks Steve. Glad you like it.
David.