IS THIS POETRY?

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IS THIS POETRY?

 

When you wear your thin dress

And look at me

Is this poetry

 

When I touch your arm

Casually

Is this poetry

 

When your eyes shine

Magnificently

Is this poetry

 

When we lie together

Silently

 

And the breeze lifts the curtain

Gently

 

To reveal the moon shining

Romantically

 

Please tell me

Honestly

 

Is

 

This

 

Poetry ?

 

 

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David Subacchi

Wed 22nd May 2013 21:54

Thanks Steve. Glad you like it.

David.

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Steve Higgins

Wed 22nd May 2013 02:08

Nice piece of work -love it,
Steve

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David Subacchi

Tue 7th May 2013 20:16

Thanks Stella :)

David

<Deleted User> (6315)

Tue 7th May 2013 00:52

aww David...look at you two there!..and yes I think you should keep the this..keeps all that romance in the present doesn't it?.. :)

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Julian (Admin)

Mon 6th May 2013 21:02

Well, you did ask: if that is poetry, then so is this.

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Harry O'Neill

Mon 6th May 2013 20:51


Yes

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David Subacchi

Sun 5th May 2013 13:28

Thanks Stuart and will do!

David

<Deleted User> (11056)

Sun 5th May 2013 13:07

Very nice sentiment, check out my Vegas wedding poem. :)

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David Subacchi

Sun 5th May 2013 09:59

Originally 'Is THAT poetry' ? but have changed to 'THIS'. Happy for any comments on this as I am not 100% on which it should be! :)

David

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David Subacchi

Sat 4th May 2013 22:24

You can read more of my poetry and see some videos simply by searching on line for SUBACCHI+POETRY.

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