Morning
Awoken
By your touch
Kissing my cheek with
The grace of a feather
From the bird
That glides
Through the delicate sunshine
Of the early morning sky
Outside my window
Comments
I really like the elegant poetic image here - nice and uncluttered. Has a Japanese feel to it, for me, for some reason.
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Andy Ainsworth
Wed 27th Mar 2013 09:57
Thanks Ann. I often write in the 5-7-5 format of Haiku just to gather my thoughts and observations and set them out neatly. I find this really helps in providing ideas for other writing and structuring some of my poems.