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Guerre de Plume

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The plexus of poetry,

perpetually beautiful,

eschews a land

brought barren

by the bland and

simple self.


The little one looks on

a small, dark stream

and makes

beautiful connection

with the glen

chosen by a God

free of envy.


Praised by sea laurels

through etto false,

to meet a rocky

crumbled town.


Who is Sylvia?

What is she?

That all our swains commend her?

Holy, fair and wise is she.

She is the land.

◄ Plume de Guerre

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Malpoet

Wed 28th Jan 2009 09:46

The punk who tuated it is really beyond sorting.

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Siren

Wed 28th Jan 2009 00:42

I think that one will be well worth the time sorting out the punctuation.

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Malpoet

Tue 27th Jan 2009 16:35

Oops too much 'of'.

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Malpoet

Tue 27th Jan 2009 16:27

Burn baby burn.
Heed not the siren calls
of of gorgeous glens
or black and dappled streams
that babble, never slide,
upon their asses
at the nexus
of firm folded
hoof unstoned.

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Siren

Tue 27th Jan 2009 16:12

So that's what a 'drugs mule' means - a donkey with two joints!

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Malpoet

Tue 27th Jan 2009 16:01

I don't approve of double jointed donkeys.

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Siren

Tue 27th Jan 2009 14:53

Wow. Talk about Postmodernism. Now Write Club's gone self-reflexive on our asses!

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