My first Haiku
The small pond expands
with autumn's tepid rainfall
In ice nothing thrives.
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More than syllables, which are contrary to English anyway, I think you have caught the haiku intent of exposing an arresting thought, nature based.
More than syllables, which are contrary to English anyway, I think you have caught the haiku intent of exposing an arresting thought, nature based.
And lovely too!
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DavidAddington
Sat 7th Nov 2015 21:51
That is a great attempt for a first Haiku Alison