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Cath and Sue are eating their packed lunches in a caf,

Enjoying their tasty meals and having a laugh.

An employee remarks as he passes pushing a mop,

"I'm sorry your not allowed to eat your own food here ! "So they swap.

 

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Julian (Admin)

Thu 13th Dec 2012 11:35

Excellent. just for consistency, you might want to change 'were' to 'are'. as Harry says, succinct.

tony sheridan

Wed 12th Dec 2012 19:30

Love it! "So they swap." Great punchline! Take care, Tony.

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 12th Dec 2012 16:47




Concise - man - concise...Bravo!

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