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Memory Beach

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Memory Beach  


At weekends, on holidays, in all sorts of weather,

With swimsuits and wellies we go to the beach,

With buckets of upside-down sand we build castles,

And dig moats around them that fill up with sea.  



We gather dry starfish as brittle as biscuits,

Driftwood sandpapered and washed by the waves;

Pebbles, glass smooth, shaped by years in the ocean,

We sift through the flotsam for shells in shy coves.

                     
                    
We ponder the rock pools and wonder of mermaids,

Tell tall tales of jellyfish stings and jump clear,

Dare to touch seaweed and dead crabs, so stinky,

Jabbing and jousting a snapped craggy claw.  


As pirates swashbuckling, we plunder dune islands,

Tumbling down gullies of hot windblown sand.

Playing cool cowboys and super Sioux Indians,

We slay mutant monsters until the day’s end.  


Back by the bay, the tide’s turning, waves breaking,

Invading the shoreline, the swell of the sea 

Floods moats; our fortress defences fall crumbling,

Collapsing sandcastles that sweep clean away. 

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This poem is included in my anthology of children's poetry 'We Are Poets!' which is available to buy from www.flapjackpress.co.uk for £5.99 including p&p. It's also available from The Cornerhouse, Manchester and News From Nowhere, Bold Street, Liverpool.

The poem also features in the 'We Are Poets!' 'round the world' show for KS2 and has musical backing from Air Fracture www.myspace.com/airfracture. You can hear more poems from the 'We Are Poets!' performances if you visit our myspace page www.myspace.com/poetsarewe






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Helen Thomas

Sun 11th Jan 2009 15:17

Glad you liked it Gus. By the way, I like your shoes!

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Gus Jonsson

Sun 11th Jan 2009 15:10

Wonderful wonderful''''
love the pants of ya
GusX

Helen Thomas

Sun 11th Jan 2009 14:13

Thank you Janet, Alison and Anthony. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem - your comments are greatly appreciated!
I loved Enid Blyton as a kid. I know she's had a bad press more recently, but I would still count 'The Magic Faraway Tree' as a favourite book from childhood and recall the sense of loss that I felt when I finished it.

Thanks again everyone for taking the time to read / listen and comment.
HT

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Sun 11th Jan 2009 13:23

Hi Helen,
Your poem reminded me very much of the adventures of the famous five books by Enid Blyton. Great stuff with some fantastic lines and imagery.
On the other side of the coin, i could turn this into a beach meditation. A fun one.
Janet.x

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Alison Mary Dunn

Sun 11th Jan 2009 12:40

Hi Helen,
I just loved reading this poem. So vivd those precious memories of happy childhood days on 'Memory Beach'. As Anthony says, the sense of loss is present at the end as the tide sweeps away this day and that of our childhood innocence. Lovely

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Anthony Emmerson

Sun 11th Jan 2009 11:38

Hi Helen.
I found this very evocative with all its calls to memories and the senses. The sense of loss, not only at day's end, but of childhood innocence, is palpably demonstrated. Excellent.
A.E.

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