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Early days, early doors

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Light lingers, brightening the evening sky

Through thick grey cloud, reviving earthbound hopes

Senses respond, stimulating mind's eye

And though things are no better, ego copes

Thoughts drift to summer outings, fancy gropes

For roots and branches halfway down the cliff

To slow the slide. Opening envelopes

Of bills and parking violations, stiff

Drink as the darkness inks the sky, a sieve

Removes the stars. Shit lingers, has to lie

On pavements, unattended; no fly creeps

On its frosty moonlike surfaces. If

Days were warmer, would they feel less lonely -

Those days of summer's scantily-clad groups?

◄ Annie Lennox get your gun

An interview with God ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (4446)

Sat 10th Jan 2009 09:31

this is seriously good. Wish I'd written this.

<Deleted User> (4548)

Thu 8th Jan 2009 23:17

yeah u gotta love vegimite haha

<Deleted User>

Thu 8th Jan 2009 18:58

The format is intersting and I can read it very easily as it has good rhythm and flows, but for some reason, I can't get all the contrasting images to harmonise in my head mm - will read a few more times (although I have read this a few times now)

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