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Bloody Valentine

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I grabbed the blade
She held the handle
I gripped it tight
She swifly pulled 
and smiled 
I looked at her smile
She assured me of 
our continuing friendship.
As the blood seeped
between my forgotten
fingers
 
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Katy Megan Hughes

Sun 21st Oct 2012 09:55

I love the "edgyiness" of this, it hints at that all is not what it seems, and leave me wanting to know more about the before and after...

Katy

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