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THE WALL

I've hit the wall

full stop ! 

I'm blocked out

with nowt

to say

I can't play a note

or even hum

a tune.

 

I've tried  spoon

feeding

my eyes

and rubbing

my thighs

like Vic Reeves

but I can't

retrieve

a rhyme or thought

my brain age

is nought.

 

I'm distraught !

 

Please help

por favor

before I bang  my head

against the door.

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Mike Hilton

Thu 14th Jun 2012 15:26

Thanks Guys for your concerns.

Laura.
I'll try my best!

Patricia & Stefan.
I like your idea as well.

I'll give all your ideas a go.....maybe all at the same time time!

Mike

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Laura Taylor

Thu 14th Jun 2012 09:49

Try writing a haiku Mike ;) I find trying to write to different forms can sometimes lift that barrier.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 13th Jun 2012 23:18

It-will-pass Mike.
we prescribe two bimbo,s a night
washed down with a bottle of Jack!

see you on tuther side-P&S.xx

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