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The Schoolmistress

The School Mistress

 

She hides behind walls of hollow words,

clay words baked by burning hopes.

Words moulded from mud and straw

surround her dust drenched days

as desert dunes drift the passing years.

No bells ring from these ramparts,

no wisdom wrung from these  words,

no new life flung to find the heavens.

The silence of expanding stars listens, learns.

Dartsharp drawn from  the dry womb sting,

arrows from a quiver of bone, shatter

the shimmering mirage outside her space,

shards slice the tenderness of dreams

inked on deskwood, carved on oaks.

◄ Ethnic Cleansing

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 18th Apr 2012 01:07

There are some great images:- 'walls of hollow words' 'The tenderness of dreams inked on deskwood.'
As Harry says the description is not of an inspiring person but rather a dried-up, unfulfilled shell of a person and the format of unrhymed lines reinforces this perception.Nice one.XX

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 16th Apr 2012 07:36

Slightly different words in the audio - I like both versions!

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 15th Apr 2012 16:44


She certainly doesn`t sound like one of those teachers who inspired your love of poetry Nick.

Nice use of the unrhymed sonnet form

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