Examination

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At last we reach examination day
and chewing on my full-of-hope 2B
I sit in silence at my desk and pray
for one last chance of saving my degree,
all work evaporating from my head
as if I’d never done a day’s revision
and spent the time with magazines in bed.
Here’s question one. I make my first decision.
       With A, I say I’m sorry for each action.
       With B, I say I should have been more bold.
       With C, I say I’m careless to distraction.
       With D, I say my dedication’s cold.
With E, I say I may not earn your love.
I fail the test. It’s all of the above.

First published in 14 by 14, August 2011.

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Marnanel Thurman

Mon 16th Apr 2012 14:42

Nick: Thank you! The first two quatrains (are supposed to) form an octet. ababcdcdefefgg is a pretty standard Shakespearean sonnet form.

Yvonne was joking that if I added a letter to my name I'd have fourteen letters, to parallel the fourteen lines of a sonnet.

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Mon 9th Apr 2012 12:53

3 quatrain and 1 couplet, hum! does this qualify as a sonnet? if so, from which school?
great stuff, as usual, TT, what's this about adding a 14th letter to your name? ta muchly, NIck.

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Yvonne Brunton

Wed 4th Apr 2012 14:34

Hi Thomas. I enjoyed this sonnet. The 'full of hope 2B' is such a good image encapsulating the candidate's fears and prayers.( graphic description?) But I like the penultimate line for its revelation of perhaps another layer in this poem.
Top Marks!
By the way, Mr.King of the Sonnets, if you have a middle name and use that initial, you would have a 14-letter name.
( I think maybe I should get out more!) XX

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