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TWO 'AULD 'UNS SAT ON A BENCH

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His eyes moved slowly as he watched them pass

A young mother pushing her trolley with the kids in tow

Like she was competing for the Grand Prix

Thinking thoughts of what to make for tea

 

Thowld woman spoke first

Never 'ad  school runs when I was a lass

Nah he agreed

Then suddenly his thoughts re-wound

Like the re-play on the old VHS

To the time when his ma had said

Get off with yer, and gave him a clip roundth ear

And  behave yerself - or else

No hugs there , no rides in a car

No luxeries that went that far

Just the  memories of a motherly arm wrapped around his head

Near suffocation from her ample breasts

The scent  on her pinny

Of flour and yeast

Then later the taste of home made bread

 

Well 'spose 'ad best get 'is tea

Aye Lass get on yer way

She rose up with a creak and a sigh

And trudged onwards

Towards the cold grey sky

Till she was just a speck in the old mans eye

 

'Ad best get on too, he thought to hiself

And as he rose to leave

He saw the sign on the old worn seat

Just about seen  where once was shining brass

WHY NOT SIT AWHILE

AND PUT THE WORLD TO RIGHTS

 

◄ CHILD OF WAR OR SO WE CAN HEAR

Mickey Finn(Awld Lancy Poem) Anonymoose ►

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Darren Lea-grime

Wed 29th Oct 2014 08:52

cheers for the comments on do you remember heart and soul and the costa coffee.

i love this poem, as has been said before love the characters, took me back to when we sat with my grandparents and listened to them putting the world to rights...

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winston plowes

Fri 12th Oct 2012 22:17

Lots of character in this Jean :-)

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Hugh

Fri 12th Oct 2012 12:22

"His eyes moved slowly as he watched them pass"

"She rose up with a creak and a sigh"

Great phrases .A fabulous poem reflecting on the past of how it used to be."Thoughts re-wound"Well done!!

<Deleted User> (6315)

Wed 4th Apr 2012 10:10


So enjoyed reading this Jean..brought back memories for me.. :)

<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 3rd Apr 2012 22:33

Nay thar knaws lass
from Luton th'airport.

As long as uz stairz clear
'o'that theeur Rossendiddle
eeeee now theeurs a carnty
thats a big load'o'nothin!:(

<Deleted User> (6895)

Tue 3rd Apr 2012 21:47

ee ba eck jean
thars dunna gudden 'ere m'dear.

It were reet nice,th'endin bit wu'champion.

duz thi think it'll be awreet
if uzduz a tracin of it ont'tisher pairper?

or better'un that,al light
thi gas powered printer up
and mairk wonna them theeur' copies
thar knows.xx

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