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One Night Stand

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One Night Stand

 

Skinny-dipping off Seaford Head

in the ripening sun.

Bobbed hair and a giggle

stripping off the night,

calling me to follow,

white breasts firm and smooth

as wave-sucked rocks,

a slender back begging

to be played from neck

down to where wavelets

make her tip-toe and

water laps tight curls.

 

Shingle has shifted a bay length

since, the chalk cliff retreated

an eroded

lifetime.

What her name was I never knew.

But I remember the ripples in the water.

◄ The Heron

The Disappearance of John J. Dyer ►

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<Deleted User> (10123)

Tue 20th Mar 2012 21:17

I imagine rippled memories echo for quite a few but they don't get them down like you. Many thanks, Nick. (Nick is always a good first name to have!)

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Laura Taylor

Tue 20th Mar 2012 09:36

Beautiful. That first verse is jampacked with fantastic images...'water laps tight curls' :)

I just looked up Seaford Head on google images - wow!

I like the structure of this - quite unusual.

And that's never a photo of you, is it?!

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