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Temple of Fiddes

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Temple of Fiddes

An Invocation

 

In a trance, amid the heady fumes of burning laurel

Sage leaves flame, crackle, bend and twist upward

Down from the mountain top
And out of the field, flock to us now
Out of your sacred precincts, to your grove
Of elder trees, and your altars
Smoking with incense, dripping with honey

Where cold, whisp’ring water flows
Through the soft branches,
In scene shadow’d fern,
Sleep eternal falls from silvery leaves
An enchantment bestow’d

Horses grazing in a meadow
Of verdant spring flowers
And where the breeze blows fragrant,
Here at the Temple
Delicately in golden cups
Nectar is poured, mixed for our festival.

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John Duffus

Tue 13th Mar 2012 17:09

Thanks Ann. It was written as a response to another poem in the blog called 'Altar To The Gods' and it made me wonder about endurance and permanence as themes. What survives after all our great buildings and dogmas have gone? The broken, man-made altar is quite insignificant when compared to the continuum of nature - the living proof of persistence. Of what lasting value are our structures, both physical & abstract? I think all we can hope for are a few brief moments of transcendence by observing what naturally occurs rather than inventing imaginary beings. We all have our own mythologies that we nurture, and quite right too!

Perhaps it should continue to make a point or reach a conclusion rather than just spatter the page with imagery?

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Ann Foxglove

Tue 13th Mar 2012 08:50

Very beautiful images here. I feel I want to have sosme more of this poem - what happens next? Or maybe just a good time had by all! :)

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