Underneath

The street is multicoloured

underneath my panic – rushing down, feet tangled up in leaves.

The pavement snaps – my nutrient, underneath;

hands punching through the granite,  angles, wired triangles,

telephone trees,

spurred from my robotic sleeping – underneath me, underneath,

 

underneath

 

a code carved by roads as ready as veins.

The people come and go, beta blockers to the day –

my minute control – the light that flickers

from above.

I am so well hidden, I do not even know

that I am  -

the street, the cars, the cold damp blot of yellow

overhead,

the twitching fingers underneath the hem of window lace,

the bright red coke can –  guts glittering in the pad

of fox tongues.

 

I am so unknown

that they do not even know

that I am

 underneath their feet, clutching their steps,

hollow tinnitus–

something so indecipherable, unique to nothing –

I am everything where everything is

and underneath all that, something else too.

 

Commute

wherever there is example –

I am underneath, existing or maybe not –

full fathom five in bottle clash,

sweat of newspeak, grimy tabloid earth,

sewer swelled and meth mapped

 

and sometimes when you see me,

I could still be moving when you do not.

 

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Comments

<Deleted User> (10123)

Wed 7th Mar 2012 10:43

'Underneath'
Phew! wish I could write like that. Goodly enough from anyone's point of view. Ta much, enjoyed it lorry-loads.
ps. Do you have to be called 'Nick' to comment?

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winston plowes

Tue 6th Mar 2012 23:05

Hi M. Well thats the first time I think anyone on WOL has accused you of too MUCH of an explanation! (Nick). I also loved this and the rawness of the first part and it has reminded me to get my own embryonic (Roads as veins) poem finished. Win x

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Nick Coleman

Tue 6th Mar 2012 16:11

Like this a lot and especially the first verse. (Maybe some of the penultimate explains too much?)

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Tue 6th Mar 2012 15:03

This should be a painting that I have yet to paint. I don't suppose it should make sense but thought I would just see what could be said about it. The painting doesn't either...just a thought of some machine existing through a landscape, not being a form at all in itself....ha ha ha...I'd like to see what you think I mean...

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