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SHE KILLED  (K)

 

Am listening to music to heel my wounds

Coz theyre bleeding more than they should

I cant beleve to me what she did

Living me lying on the ground half dead

I thought she was only joking

But I saw it when away she was walking

I scrawled along the dust in pain

N when I told people they thought I was insane

After all they saw I was a poor fellow

So why should I be killed by another fellow

I looked at them and wished they only knew

Coz what I spoke to them was only news

I tried to tell them what I felt

So am going to tell you what I felt

It was her, her , the lover of ma life

I knew I would stay with her my entire life

So one day to me she talked

That I should be missing her to me she told

Not knowing it was the end of what we had

The beautiful love and joy from her I had

Then suddenly  thing started going wrong

That was when I knew I was kinda  wrong

Of letting her go coz she went forever

She switched her line and I didn’t hear her ever

I miss her, I want her back, I want

But my heart has grown to live without her

Coz she KILLED (I) she KILLED (K)

She KILLED  (E)  double (R)  (WHY)

And evrytime I ask myself why

But I want to stay in peace and let her fly

Fly, fly away to do what she want

Coz I wount be there to refuse  her what she want

Coz she KILLED (I) she KILLED (K)

She KILLED  (E)  double (R)  (WHY)

WHY

 

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                                                                                               Kerry Kipsome

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kerry kipsome

Fri 20th Jul 2012 11:05

hi Patricia and Stefan it has been long since i heard from you again thanks for the comment. i tried to bring her back but she went away am now working on things that made me to move on once i finish i will post them for you to see and criticize.

<Deleted User> (6895)

Wed 7th Mar 2012 09:28

Loved the cleverness!

nice one(K)(K)

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