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In Este

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In Este the vineyards weeped under the expanding
fog. Her empty eyes stared at me and 
in their reverberating darkness I was trapped as
her spirit formed aged velvet crystals in my glass.
 
Violins scented of spring and a tiny droplet from her
barefooted dance inundated the morning breeze.
My foot stamped the gravel as a thinly crusted air 
forced its way into my soul. Then 
 
life evolved from her humid smile and from 
her ancient throne she guided the perennial  path
of yellow in the automne while day and
 
night her people gather under bread of moon
and salt of stars, pulling forward into 
the simple complexity of life
 

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Tue 21st Feb 2012 09:26

I agree with Stella - some amazing stuff here. I, too, like 'violins scented with spring...' - 'bread of the moon'....beautiful!

Am really enjoying reading your work.

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Mon 20th Feb 2012 23:12


This is so good..so many original thoughts within it..Viollins scented of spring, aged velvet crystals..super stuff and a damn good read :))

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