Some Times I Change My Mind
Sometimes I change my mind,
terrible nerve you got left.
free verse experimental word association free form contemporary
You have a truly original voice - I've not read anything quite like these pieces. There's an almost conversational feel to them, and it REALLY works.
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Barbi Touron
Mon 20th Feb 2012 18:46
Your right, I guess these are conversations, I've never really thought about it. I've just been holding a lot in my whole life (things I've wanted to tell people or hell just scream out for no god damn reason)and I guess for me this is the easiest way to say all the things bouncing off the walls inside of me. I think it can be confusing to a reader, but I hope not. i'm trying to make it more coherent and still be me, but editing is seeming quite tricky. Best Wishes