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The Sea Creaks

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The Sea Creaks

Like the rigging on our boat

Clouds swirl

Like a Spanish dancer

More and more

Faster and faster

Seagulls glide to the Shore

Their wings nudged by the Wind

A sublime ending to our day

We stand here soaked by spray

Totally moved

Because the Sea Creaks

 

◄ ODE TO DYLAN

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jean lucy thompson

Tue 19th Feb 2013 16:10

Thanx everyone So kind :)

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Francine

Sun 11th Dec 2011 18:31

Very atmospheric - a beautiful feeling!

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Tommy Carroll

Sun 11th Dec 2011 17:08

wow- Jean- 'the sea creaks' and 'their wings nudged by the wind'.

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winston plowes

Sat 10th Dec 2011 23:12

Loved the Spanish dancer. and indeed the whole neat thing. (Not an American neat that, rather a Yorkshire one) Escapes for a few seconds. Thankyou. Win x

<Deleted User> (6315)

Sat 10th Dec 2011 15:41


How lovely!..enjoyed this :o)

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