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Moment of craziness

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Moment of craziness, gate to sweet hell

One step forward and you’re in

Turn your back never stand still

It’s an obvious deadly sin,

 

This is what you fear

Falling in a sudden mystery

Wave you away, where you suppose not to be

Not knowing how to phrase what you feel,

 

You will speak this to no one

Yet, you must talk to someone

Don’t know how to deuced bored and lonely

Losing excitements unexpectedly,

 

You found it, solely out there

That feeling, that energy, though rare

At once with one delicious pain

The pulses and the nerves of twain.

◄ Hidden World Unknown

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 23rd Aug 2010 11:42

Punchy, sincere and personal. One of the 'worths' of poetry is true emotional contact with others; this succeeds well.

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