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She Changes

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Things you see in her open arms

 are like tiny lives tunnelling; fibre optics

of puberty and motherhood, pulled to

in season, neon watchwords

to the inner heart

 

swelling, the bell of, the jelly fish -

the tides inside; transparent switches of mood.

Sometimes, sometimes,

she decides, the sky is better on its side

 

stripping her belly with yellow and black,

like cities from the mouths

of her sweet children, more than half

a dozen a day.

 

A bone of tangerine, the sun bent

over the rim, and into her

you fall; an ear shaped

in the rib cage,

almost home on the way,

 

and what she means to you.

◄ Silentium

Trip Wolf ►

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Laura Taylor

Fri 14th Oct 2011 11:12

Incredible. Beautiful. Otherworldly. Can't string a sentence together ;)

Love it

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Thu 13th Oct 2011 14:04

aw Win - those little blighters! I love them!

Elaine - thank you!

x

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Elaine Booth

Wed 12th Oct 2011 22:42

Wow, this is very fine, Marianne.
Btw, many thanks for your comment on my recent offering. XX

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winston plowes

Wed 12th Oct 2011 20:58

A great read Marianne which sent all these images whirling round my head. Have a look at this (But please try at least to ignore the overly american dumbed down commentary -

http://video.nationalgeographic.com.au/video/player/animals/fish-animals/spiny-rayed-fish/cichlid_movingyoung.html

Win x

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