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Cooking for Infidels

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No need for air, for light,

just tilt your head backwards

and allow the past

to roll down your face.

Hold on to that.

 

Persephone shifted her weight

in time to the point

she was making.

She never stood erect-

she was always making a point.

 

Even with a potato peeler

there was an air

of menace-

she would mix it 

in with the mash.

 

Then backwards glancing

her laugh would fill 

this empty space

and with her meeting

eyes adore my approach.

 

 

◄ D Minor

Arab spring ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (6315)

Tue 27th Sep 2011 22:49


Should I know her?..I have a feeling that perhaps I should but for the life of me..I dunno!

The poem is full and rich and rather lovely too.. ah the way to a mans heart is mash..mish-mash?..I shall shut up..

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winston plowes

Tue 27th Sep 2011 14:45

Hi Tommy, An odd one this. Nothing unusal then form you. lol. Great oblique observations. The 'shifteng of weight in time' and all of the opening stanza are great images. As to who it is in the picture... A mystery to me

Win

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