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Oh Nectarine!

Cousin of the peach

Quite unlike the fuzziness

Velvety smoothness, firm and succulent

And the flesh!

A yellow festering and humid sun!

The nectar of secrecy

Gifted by Mother Nature to my mouth!

I’m panic buying my nectarines

Recession beckons and

I must sink my central incisors into my nectarines

The initial dive into my dearest

Is enough, to wish all other senses away

But the senses are reeling

From her exposure of fleshy juices

A taste of perfection, taints my tongue

The voice calls from within

The cage of curvaceous orb

I will pull her from the temporary dwelling

And acquaint her to my teeth

She will live a life or dormancy

Until a revolution of aftertaste arises

◄ The Shrink

Peppered By The Beat Generation ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (5646)

Fri 15th Aug 2008 23:00

Scrumptious! the juice is dribbling down my lips and onto my chin.
ps. i adore nectarines, but they have to be perfectly ripe.
Janet.x

<Deleted User> (4446)

Fri 15th Aug 2008 18:49

made me grin

Ieuan Cilgwri

Fri 15th Aug 2008 12:35

A most refreshing read - loved the way you wrapped your words and your teeth around this one Sean - nice one indeedy.

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