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Bobbing and Peering

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The street is lined with pretty girls,

in micro skirts and cheeky curls.

They look at every passing car.

Bobbing and peering.

 

Behind them lurk their pimping men.

Waiting 'til they've scored, and then,

seizing all their paltry gains.

Far from endearing.

 

Suited men in lavish cars,

cruise around by seedy bars.

Eying up each girl in turn.

Drooling and leering.

 

He cranes his head in semi dark.

Selecting one before the park.

Clipping kerb as he pulls up.

Rocking the steering.

 

They talk about the business deal.

What she'll do, and how he'll feel.

Happily they set the price.

Laughing and cheering.

 

Short journey to a lonely plot.

He pays, and strips her on the spot.

She rapidly begins the job.

Bucking and rearing.

 

It's over, in a sudden flash.

He's angry at his waste of cash,

and grabs her by the throat.

Cringing and fearing.

 

 

She's found and then identified.

A few regret that she has died.

They come to say their last farewell.

Sadly revering.

 

The punter has his day in court,

regretting only that he's caught.

Claims he's blameless, not his fault.

Lying and sneering.

 

The judge who sends him down for life,

expresses sadness for his wife.

As crowds outside, bay for his blood.

Taunting and jeering.

 

The girls are still along the street,

standing at their usual beat.

Working as they always did.

Bobbing and peering.

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Malpoet

Sat 21st Feb 2009 22:26

No it isn't Rodney. It is an observational piece certainly, but that is very different from voyeurism. It is a story highlighting in verse the horrible reality of the dangers of this way of life and the kinds of emotions it raises as well as the fact that it continues unchanged by the horrible violence that has always gone with it. To suggest that it is in some way sexually titillating misses the point by a very long way.

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Rodney Wood

Sat 21st Feb 2009 15:53

A bit voyeuristic eh!

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Christopher Dawson

Wed 18th Feb 2009 17:46

I read so very little poetry, disliking so very much of it...but I really did enjoy and like this piece.

Any simple person could read, follow and understand...perhaps that's why!

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