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I am no new Shakespere and a far cry from Thomas but this helps me to be humble and will forever keep me honest. You may laugh at some of my rhymes and the construction of chosen words but these are carefully crafted and are produced to be heard. Ever contradicting and written in empty rage this is the start of the verses assisting my soul in being saved.
Fair enough - works perfectly well in that way :)
Lizzie
Thu 21st Jul 2011 20:50
Thanks.
I think the paragraphs represent the sense of urgency I felt when I wrote it.
Is there a particular reason why you've chosen not to structure this in lines? I mean, rather than the paragraph style shown here?
I like that last line...assisting my soul in being saved. More common than I thought, that feeling.
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Lizzie
Fri 22nd Jul 2011 19:52
Thanks again :) x